Feedback:

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Audio visual:


(italics signifying the change has been made and feedback has been taken into account)
  • change "breath" to "breathe"
  • change "its" to "it's"
  • Investigate into Katie audio, it seems to be a lot quieter than the rest.
  • Refilm Lauren's underlying video - weird music over the top 
  • Check the rest of grammar 
  • Look at the font - bit blocky? bit in you're face
  • Get rid of subtitles that are unnecessary - "sick" and "sickness"
  • Eliza needs an apostrophe 
  • Get more angles of Lily 
Magazine:
  • Add barcode
  • Different image on the second page of the spread - zoom into image
  • Check spelling and grammar of article - put onto pages and do it from there
  • Re think quote
  • Re think about text/ font

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